crit

these are my final pieces that i showed at crit. the majority of the comments were positive saying how they linked the ink style and the social media worked particularly well. 

some of the changes that people mentioned where 

• type (using the same font throughout every piece) 
• the ink splatters changing in opacity 
• the card machine was read as a phone to some people although i don't agree with that and i'm happy with the way it came out.

overall the comments where positive and i feel confident that i have produced the work required by the brief.